A relative clause is inserted into the middle of an independent clause and it acts as an adjective: it gives a description about the subject of the independent clause.
The three words that most often start a relative clause are that, which and who.
When starting a relative clause with "that," there is no need for commas. For example:
IC: The book is really good.
IC with RC: The book that I'm reading now is really good.
However, when starting a relative clause with who or which, you do need to separate the relative clause from the rest of the sentence with commas. For example:
IC: Johnny runs faster than anyone I've ever seen.
IC with RC: Johnny, who won the state championship last year, runs faster than anyone I've ever seen.
IC: Mom-mom is coming over for dinner.
IC with RC: Mom-mom, which is what I call my grandmother, is coming over for dinner.
Your Assignment:
Create two responses. Each response will feature three independent clauses and then create an independent clause with a relative clause from the independent clause, justu like I did above. So, two responses, three examples in each response.
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IC: The Warrior series is very well written.
ReplyDeleteIC with RC: The Warriors series, which is the series that I'm in now, is very well written.
IC: My dog Pretzel is very cute.
IC with RC: My dog pretzel, who I love so much, is very cute.
IC: My brother is so annoying.
IC with RC: My brother, who is younger than me, is annoying.
IC: My mom is picking me up.
ReplyDeleteIC WITH RC: My mom, who drives realy fast, is picking me up.
IC: My grandmother is having a party.
IC WITH RC: My grandmother, who is having a party, did not remember to invite me.
IC: My nana is a very good cook.
IC My nana, who is a very good cook, makes her own recipes.
IC: Rachel is the best dancer I know.
ReplyDeleteIC with RC: Rachel, who has been dancing all her life, is the best dancer I know.
IC: Eddie is really good at video games.
IC with RC: Eddie, who has a lot of video games, is really good at video games.
IC: Kate loves storys.
IC with RC: Kate, loves storys, she just got her story published.
Mychala Conti
IC: Jake hates chicken.
ReplyDeleteIC with RC: Jake, is a vegetarian, he hates chicken.
IC: Amy loves attention.
IC with RC: Amy, wants her own T.V. show, she loves attention.
IC: Mychala loves phones.
IC with RC: Mychala, has her own phone, she loves phones.
Mychala Conti
IC: The cat is stuck in the tree.
ReplyDeleteIC: The cat that climbed up the tree is now stuck.
IC: Kenny cooks really good food.
IC: Kenny, who went to culinary school cooks really good food.
IC: The cat was getting chased by the dog.
IC: The cat that stole the dogs chew toy is getting chased by the dog.
IC: The girl cut her knee.
ReplyDeleteIC: The girl, who feel on the ground cut her knee.
IC: The lady crashed into another car.
IC: The lady that ran the red light crashed into another car.
IC: The girl lost her cell phone.
IC: The girl,who lost her cell phone got grounded.
1 IC: I am reading a book called Foundation.
ReplyDeleteIC with RC: I am reading a book that is currently being filmed as a movie called Foundation.
2 IC: Johnny's friend is running for President.
IC with RC: Johnny's friend, who graduated from Harvard, is running for President.
3 IC: J.K Rowling grew up in England.
IC with RC: J.K Rowling, who wrote the Harry Potter series, grew up in England.
IC: This pencil writes very good.
ReplyDeleteIC with RC: The pencil that I'm writing with writes very good.
IC: Charlie throws harder than anyone I ever knew.
IC with RC: Charlie, who is on the football team, throws harder than anyone I ever knew.
IC: Joey is coming to play with me.
IC with RC: Joey, who is my neighbor, is coming over to play with me.
IC: The show is entertaining.
ReplyDeleteIC with RC: The show that I'm watching is entertaining.
IC: Sally sings better than anyone.
IC with RC: Sally, who won American Idol, sings better than anyone.
IC: Lucky is coming home from the pet store.
IC with RC: Lucky, who is my dog, is coming home from the pet store.
IC: Jay is very talented.
ReplyDeleteIC with RC: Jay, the raft builder, is very talented.
IC: Toby swam all over the shoreline.
IC with RC: Toby, who Jay admires for his speed, swam all over the shoreline.
IC: Sharii lives in the middle of a lake.
IC with RC: Sharii, who is a little odd, lives in the middle of a lake.
I used the characters from my memoir, if that's okay. I don't have any more characters, in case you were wondering.
Emily Haruhi/Fox O'Donnel
ic:jimmy eats alot of taco bell.
ReplyDeleteic with rc:jimmy,(who is fat) eats alot of taco bell
ic:i play xbox.
ic with rc: i play xbox ( wich is made by microsoft)
ic: i eat cake.
ic with rc i eat cake
(wich is chocolate).
IC: I have friends who come to Baiting Hollow in the summer.
ReplyDeleteIC with RC: I have friends, who are from Queens, come to Baiting Hollow in the summer.
IC: I have a sibling.
IC with RC: I have a, younger, sibling.
IC: My dad came to my first game.
IC with RC: My dad, who embarresed me, came to my first game.
IC: Axel has a buddy :)
ReplyDeleteIC with RC: Axel has a buddy, and his name is Roxas :)
IC: Demyx can't fight.
IC with RC: Demyx is a wimp, so he can't fight.
IC: Sora has friends :p
IC with RC: Sora has friends, but they all dissapeared! :(
I used trademarked characters... PLEASE, DISNEY!!! DON'T FILE A LOSSUIT, PLEASE!!!!!!
Response 1
ReplyDeleteIC: Gordon likes his work.
IC with RC: Gordon, who is a scientist, likes his work.
IC: Matt is good at baseball.
IC with RC: Matt, who won the entire 1st session last year, is good at baseball.
IC: Bob is good at football.
IC with RC: Bob, who won the championship game this year, is good at football.
Response 2
IC: Sam owns an airsoft gun shop.
IC with RC: Sam, who has the best prices in town, owns an airsoft gun shop.
IC: Joe works at an aquarium.
IC with RC: Joe, who owns the building, works at an aquarium.
IC: John loves sharks.
IC: with RC: John, who went into the shark dive tank, loves sharks.
Doing my first post over...
ReplyDeleteIC: Jay is very talented.
IC with RC: Jay, who is the raft builder, is very talented.
Okay, now for #2...
IC: Axel is friens with Roxas. :)
IC with RC: Axel, who isn't always nice ( :( ), is friends with Roxas.
IC: Demyx is a wimp.
IC with RC: Demyx, who is a terrible fighter, is a wimp.
IC: Sora ran away from Kairi.
IC with RC: Sora, who is a MAJOR crybaby, ran away from Kairi. :(
I used trademarked characters... THEY ARE NOT MINE!!! These characters are trademarked by Nintendo, Square Enix, and Disney. I OWN NOTHING!!!!
IC: I like pumpkin pie with whip cream on top.
ReplyDeleteIC with RC: I like pumpkin pie, which I am eating right now, with whip cream on top.
IC: Sarah likes the color neon pink.
IC with RC: Sarah, the painter, likes the color pink.
IC: Adam likes summer.
IC with RC: Adam, who is my brother, likes summer.
IC: My grandfather is coming for dinner.
ReplyDeleteIC: With RC: My grandfather, who is turning seventy, coming over for dinner.
IC: Emily has a game.
IC: With RC: Emily, who is a good at pitching, has a big game.
IC: The shirt is cool.
IC: With RC: The shirt I am buying is cool
IC: My sister has hair.
ReplyDeleteIC: With RC: My sister, who has red hair, is dying it brown.
IC: My friend has a lead part.
IC: With RC: My friend, that likes to act, is being the lead part in the play.
IC: Jessica has a pencil.
IC: With RC: Jessica, who found is in math class, is borrowing a pemcil.
IC: I like my jacket with a purple Pelle Pelle sign on it.
ReplyDeleteIC with RC: I like my jacket, which is white, with a purple Pelle Pelle sign on the front.
IC: Monique likes math class.
IC with RC: Monique, who is an A student, likes math class.
IC: June likes her phone.
IC with RC: June, who loves the summer, likes the phone.
Responses 1
ReplyDeleteIC: Bob lives in a house.
IC with RC: Bob, who plays baseball, lives in a house.
IC: My mom is a nurse.
IC with RC: My mom, who works at Cedar Lodge, is a nurse.
IC: Joe works at Ground Round.
IC with RC: Joe, who is 14 years old, works at Ground Round.
Responses 2
IC: The book is on the ground.
IC with RC: The book that I saw in a magazine is on the ground.
IC: The mouse is connected to the computer.
IC with RC: The mouse, which is broken, is connected to the computer.
IC: The paper plates are on the counter.
IC with RC: The paper plates that have food on them are on the counter.
-Michael McKay
IC:John is in a band.
ReplyDeleteIC with RC: John, who plays the drums, is in a band.
IC:Phil is on XBOX.
IC with RC:Phil, who loves video games, is on XBOX.
IC:Dave is at the game.
IC with RC: Dave, who is a Met's fan, is at the game.
IC:Kyle is in gym class.
ReplyDeleteIC with RC: Kyle, who is not very athletic, is in gym class.
IC:Kevin played in the snow.
IC with RC: Kevin, who hates the outdoors, played in the snow.
IC:Freddy took the plane to Florida.
IC with RC:Freddy, who is afraid of heights, took the plane to Florida.
IC: My laptop is awesome.
ReplyDeleteIC with RC: My laptop, which is an HP, is awesome.
IC: The pizza tastes really good.
IC with RC: The pizza, which has pepperoni on it, tastes really good.
IC: Barack Obama lives in the White House.
IC with RC: Barack Obama, who is the President, lives in the White House.
IC: The pasta has too much garlic.
ReplyDeleteIC with RC: The pasta that I'm eating now has too much garlic.
IC: The shirt feels soft.
IC with RC: The shirt that I'm wearing now feels soft.
IC: Michael Jackson made many albums.
IC with RC: Michael Jackson, who was the "King of Pop", made many albums.
IC: The cat is stuck in the tree.
ReplyDeleteIC: The cat that climbed the tree is now stuck.
IC: Kenny cooks really good food.
IC: Kenny who went to culinary school, cooks really good food.
IC: The cat was getting chased by the dog.
IC: The cat that stole the dogs chew toy is getting chased by the dog
IC: The girl cut her knee.
ReplyDeleteIC: The girl who feel on the ground, cut her knee.
IC: The lady crashed into another car.
IC: The lady that ran the red light crashed into another car.
IC: The girl lost her cell phone.
IC: The girl who lost her cell phone, got grounded.
IC: The grass is green.
ReplyDeleteIC with RC: The grass that is saw in the park was green.
IC: The book is in a store.
IC with RC: I saw the bookk in a store in a magazine.
IC: I saw an ice cream cone
IC with RC: I saw the ice cream cone in a ice cream shop.
IC: I saw a car.
ReplyDeleteIC with RC: I saw the car in the parking lot.
IC: I see Riverhead Middle school.
IC with RC: I saw the Riverhead Middle school on the computer.
IC: I played xbox live.
IC with the RC: I played xbox live at a friends house.
IC: John loves pizza.
ReplyDeleteIC with RC: John always goes to the pizza palor because, he loves pizza.
IC: There's a glass in my room.
IC: The glass in my room that is on the dresser is filled with grape soda.
IC: Bob likes using pencils.
IC: Bob hates pens, so he uses a pencil in school.
IC:Olivia loves to play basketball.
ReplyDeleteIC with RC:Olivia, who loves basketball won her first basketball game.
IC:Kristen doesn't like math.
IC with RC:Kristen, who hates math failed her math quiz.
IC:I am reading a magazine about Justin Bieber.
IC with RC:The magazine that I'm now reading tells me that Justin Bieber just turned 16.
IC: My brother just started his project.
ReplyDeleteIC with RC: My brother, who hates projects, just started his project.
IC: I loved Sweeney Todd.
IC with RC: I love, because it made me cry, Sweeney Todd.
IC: My cat hates being outside.
IC with RC: My cat, because another cat attacked her, hates being outside.
IC:The water is very cold.
ReplyDeleteIC with RC:The water,which is in a bottle,is very cold.
IC:MY blanket is blue.
IC with RC:My blanket that I sleep with is blue.
IC: The summer is hot.
IC with RC: The summer,wich I cant wait for,is hot.
IC: The scissors are sharp.
ReplyDeleteIC with RC: The scissors,wich are purple,are very sharp.
IC:THe computer is in an office.
IC with RC: The computer that is black is in an office.
IC: The screwdriver is used for screws.
IC with RC: The screwdriver,which is black and white, is used for screws.
IC: My rabbit is playful.
ReplyDeleteIC with RC: My rabbit, who has brown fur, is playful.
IC: My room is messy.
IC with RC: My room, that is on the top floor, is messy.
IC: Karate is fun.
IC: Karate, which is my favorite sport, is very fun.
IC: Pizza tastes very good.
ReplyDeleteIC with RC: Pizza, that is cooked well, is very good.
IC: Baby kittens are very cute.
IC with RC: Baby kittens, that have soft fur, are very cute.
IC: John is on the basketball team.
IC with RC: John, who is very tall, is on the basketball team.
ic:wendy is poor.
ReplyDeleteic with rc:wendy ,who lives in a box ,is poor
ic:i eat cereal.
ic with rc: i eat cereal, which has low carbs.
ic: daddy is weird.
ic with rc: daddy , whose name is frank, is weird.
IC: Kelly likes eating pizza for dinner.
ReplyDeleteIC with RC: Kelly likes eating pizza that has pepperoni on it for dinner.
IC:Nikki listened to music on her ipod.
IC with RC: Nikki listened to music, which wasrecently downloaded, on her ipod.
IC: Kaitlyn was in her costume.
IC with RC: Kaitlyn, who was going trick or treating, was in her costume.
IC: James voted on Election Day.
ReplyDeleteIC with RC: James, who had recently turned eighteen, voted on Election Day.
IC: Jerry watched the movie with the good reviews.
IC with RC: Jerry watched the movie, which Brad Pitt starred in, with good reviews.
IC: Melody painted her toenails pink.
IC with RC: Melody, who already painted her finger nails, painted her toenails pink.
IC: My mom is smart.
ReplyDeleteIC with RC: My mom ,who goes tho school is smart
IC: The dog is big.
IC with RC: The dog ,who jumped on me is big.
IC: I felland got hurt.
IC with RC: I was running so fast that I fell and hurt myself.
~Tyhasiah Bell~
this is my second respnse
ReplyDeleteIC: I have a dog.
IC with RC: I have a dog whose name is Buddy.
IC: I did good in school.
IC with RC: I did so good in school that i made the honor roll.
IC: Jake broke his leg.
IC with RC: Jake who likes to skateboard broke his leg.
~Tyhasiah Bell~
IC : Andrew is scared of dogs.
ReplyDeleteIC with RC : Andrew, who has been bitten by a dog, is scared of dogs.
IC : My bedroom walls are wet.
IC with RC : My bedroom walls that I just finished painting are wet.
IC : The lions look scary.
IC with RC : The lions that I just saw on tv. look scary.
IC :
IC : Leah is coming over.
ReplyDeleteIC with RC : Leah, who is my best friend, is coming over.
IC : The flower is dead.
IC with RC : The flower, which I forgot to water, is dead.
IC : The light is bright.
IC with RC : The light that I am looking at is bright.
IC: The movie was really funny.
ReplyDeleteIC with RC: The movie that I saw was really funny.
IC: Melanie received her driver's license.
IC with RC: Melanie, who crashed her dads' car, received her driver's license.
IC: Cathy is sometimes annoying.
IC with RC: Cathy, which is what I call my sister, Catherine, is sometimes annoying.
IC:Jill likes tea
ReplyDeleteIC:Jill who likes tea has a teapot
IC:Tyler has an iPod
IC: Tyler listens to music so he has an iPod
IC:Haley has a cellphone
IC: Haley likes to text who has a cell phone
IC: Julia takes Latin
IC: Julia takes Latin so she goes to the roman banquet.
IC:John takes math
IC: john likes to solve problems so he takes math
IC: Its Maddie's birthday
IC: Its Maddie's birthdat so shes having a party
IC: I am eating dessert.
ReplyDeleteIC with RC: The dessert that I am eating, is very good.
IC: Cameron is so funny.
IC with RC: Cameron, who is a comedian, is so funny.
IC: Papa is very nice.
IC with RC: Papa, which is my Grandpa, is very nice.
IC: My friend is funny.
ReplyDeleteIC with RC: My friend, because she's used to me, is funny.
IC: I did well on my science test.
IC with RC: I did, because I studied, wel lon my science test.
IC: I did my homework.
IC with RC: I, because I was in the library, did my homework.
1 IC: My grandma is coming to visit.
ReplyDeleteIC with RC: My grandma, who lives in Germany, is coming to visit.
2 IC: My spanish project was quite complicated.
IC with RC: My spanish project, on school related words, was quite complicated.
3 IC: Joe's trophy case has eleven trophies.
IC with RC: Joe's trophy case, which is located in his room, has eleven trophies.
IC: John has the best bike ever.
ReplyDeleteRC: John, who does BMX, has the best bike ever.
IC: Zach is the fastest in class.
RC: Zach, who came in first at the county fair race, is fastest in class.
IC: Mike is the smartest in science class.
RC: Mike, who is in eighth grade advanced science, is smartest in science class.
IC: Kyle is the best at video games.
ReplyDeleteRC: Kyle, who beat me at Modern Warfare, is the best at video games.
IC: Russell can eat a lot of food.
RC: Russell, who won the eat off last year, can eat a lot of food.
IC: The cake really was good.
RC: The cake that I had eaten eairlier was really good.
IC: I love my dog Tony.
ReplyDeleteIC with RC: I love my dog Tony,who is unbearably cute.
IC: My science test was hard.
IC with RC: My science test, which was very hard, i had today.
IC: I love playing the piano.
IC with RC: I love playing the piano, which is located in the corner of the room.
IC 1: I am going to the football game.
ReplyDeleteIC 2: He went to his cousin's house.
IC 3: The boy did a kickflip on his skateboard.
IC with RC 1: I am going to the football game, which is at 7:30.
IC with RC 2: He went to his cousin's house, which is down the street.
IC with RC 3: The boy did a kickflip on his skateboard, which he thought was hard.
IC 1: He likes to play soccer.
ReplyDeleteIC 2: She went to the park.
IC 3: I like to watch my cousin play his new board game.
IC with RC 1: He likes to play soccer, which is his favorite sport.
IC with RC 2: She went to the park, which is where she goes on the weekend.
IC with RC 3: I like to watch my cousin play his new board game, which is called Monopoly.
IC: My mom is coming home today.
ReplyDeleteIC with RC: My mom, who was in florida, is coming home today.
IC: The chicken is really good.
IC with RC: The chicken that I am eating now is really good.
IC: My brother picks on me.
IC with RC: My brother, who is older than me, picks on me.
IC: Billy came over today.
ReplyDeleteIC with RC: Billy, who is my dads friend, came over today.
IC: The science quiz on astronomy was hard.
IC with RC: The science quiz on astronomy, which im not good at, was hard.
IC: My bike has a flat tire.
IC with RC: My bike that I have been riding alot has a flat tire.
IC: I went to the movies on Friday.
ReplyDeleteIC with RC: I went to the movies, which are closest to my house, on Friday
IC: Man-bear-pig terrorized South Park.
IC with RC: Man-bear-pig, who is a made up character, terrorized South Park.
IC: My dog ate the pizza left on the table.
IC with RC: My dog, who is fat, ate the pizza left on the table.
IC:I went outside on Sunday.
ReplyDeleteIC with RC: I went outside, in the morning, on Sunday.
IC: Cody came over last weekend.
IC with RC: Cody, who is my bestfriend, came over last weekend.
IC: I ate pizza on Friday.
IC with RC: I ate pizza, with pepperonies, on Friday.
IC: I called Pat on my phone.
ReplyDeleteIC with RC: I called Pat, who is in my math class, on my phone.
IC: I played Xbox after school.
IC with RC: I played Xbox, which is in my room, after school.
IC: Cody is on my Baseball team.
IC with RC: Cody, Who is really good at baseball, is on my baseball team.
IC:This series is really good.
ReplyDeleteIC with RC:This series that is Eragon is great.
IC:My mom is mad at me.
IC with RC:I broke the lamp and that made her mad.
IC:My dog ate pizza.
IC with RC:We bought pizza that my dog ate.
IC: I read a book called White Fang.
ReplyDeleteIC with RC:I saw a movie that was the book i read called White Fang.
IC:I playede a video game.
IC with RC:I found cheat's that go to the game im playing.
IC:I lost a dollar.
IC with RC:I lost a dollar wich on the same day my cousin found one.
IC: My cat jumped off the seat.
ReplyDeleteIC with RC: My cat, who is skinny jumped off the seat.
IC: I went to school because i had an ela test.
IC with RC: I went to school, I went because i had an ela test.
IC: I went to kmart.
IC with RC: I went to kmart, I went because i need to buy a safe.
IC: My dog jumped on the couch.
ReplyDeleteIC with RC: My dog, jumped on the couch because he was tired.
IC: The man ate a rabbit.
IC with RC: The man, was hungry so he ate a rabbit.
IC: The cat ate a mice.
IC with RC: The cat, ate a mice because the mice looked delicious.
IC: My dad is very nice.
ReplyDeleteIC with RC: My dad, who helps me with everything I do, is very nice.
IC: Riley is the most annoying person in the world.
IC with RC: Riley, my little brother, is the most annoying person in the world.
IC: The cat jumped over the fence.
IC with RC: The cat that was afraid of the lawnmower jumped over the fence.
IC: My dog is very playful.
ReplyDeleteIC with RC: My dog, which is the cutest dog in the world, is very playful.
IC: The lollipops are my favorite.
IC with RC: The lollipops that have gum in the middle are my favorite.
IC: The man triiped and fell.
IC with RC: The man, who had his shoes untied, tripped and fell.
IC-I RODE MY DIRTBIKE TODAY.
ReplyDeleteIC-RC-I RODE MY DIRT BIKE, WHICH IS A XR100R TODAY.
IC-HE PLAYS FOOTBALL.
IC-RC-HE PLAYS FOOTBALL, WITH IN ORDER TO PLAY HE HAS TO GO THROUGH VERY HARD PRACTISES.
IC-HE WANTS A DIRTBIKE.
IC-RC-HE WANTS A DIRTBIKE BUT HIS PARENTS WONT LET HIM HAVE ONE.
RESPONSE 2
IC-THE CAR HE HAS IS FAST.
IC-RC-THE CAR THAT HE NOW RACES IS FAST.
IC-THE GUY IS WIERD.
IC-RC- THE GUY WHO WORKS AT TOYS R US IS WIERD.
IC-I WATCHED THE NEWS.
IC-RC-I WATCHED THE NEWS AND ITS GOING TO RAIN.
IC: This weekend I played my violin.
ReplyDeleteIC with RC: This weekend, while I was a SCMEA, I played my violin.
IC: The old lady went for a walk.
IC with RC: The old lady, who has a cane, went for a walk.
IC: I have a dog.
IC with RC: I have a dog that sleeps a lot on rainy days.
IC: I bought a t-shirt.
ReplyDeleteIC with RC: I bought a t-shirt, which is green, at the store.
IC: Ann planted a tree.
IC with RC: Ann, who planted a tree, felt good about doing something for the environment.
IC: Mike was late.
IC with RC: Mike, who was late, was very embarrassed.
IC: Jessica loves reading.
ReplyDeleteIC with RC: Jessica, who is my sister, loves reading.
IC: Sean loves to eat cheese.
IC with RC: Sean, who is my brother, loves cheese.
IC: My computer is very fast.
IC with RC: My computer, which was my dad's before, is very fast.
IC: Riverhead Middle School is the best school in the world.
ReplyDeleteIC with RC: Riverhead Middle School, which is my school, is the best.
IC: Ms. Sills is an awesome English teacher.
IC with RC: Ms. Sills, who is my teacher, is an awesome English teacher.
IC: The sofa has a white covering.
IC with RC: The sofa, which my dad bought, has a white covering.
IC: The party was fun .
ReplyDeleteIC with RC: The party , that I went to tonight, was fun.
IC:Mary is good at drawing .
IC with RC: Mary , who is in my science class ,is good at drawing.
IC:The Alice In Wonderland Movie is amazing
IC with RC: The Alice And Wonderland Movie ,witch just came out is amazing .
-Claudia Rupp-
-i really dont feel good :X-
IC: Slither is a horror movie .
ReplyDeleteIC with RC: "Slither",that we watched last nigtht is a horror movie .
IC:Timmy Is An Amazing Cousin.
IC with RC: Timmy , who is my aunts son is an amazing cousin.
IC:The Roman Banquet was nothing I expected.
IC with RC: The Roman Banquet ,witch was brillent ,was nothing that I expected.
-Claudia Rupp-
-O_O Hi ( '_')^ -
IC- Penny makes the best jewerly.
ReplyDeleteIC- Penny had a lot of people who bought her jewerly, makes the best jewerly.
IC- Rachel was very smart.
IC- Rachel got a 96 on a test, was very smart.
IC- Kurt is very funny.
IC- Kurt tells the funniest jokes, is very funny.
-Samantha Carter-
Ms.Sills this is a redue.
ReplyDeleteIC- Sandy was a car.
IC- Sandy, went to the car wash everyday, was a car.
IC- Logan hated cereal.
IC- Logan, never ate cereal, he hated cereal.
IC- Nick watched television all day.
IC- Nick, never did any homework, watched television all day.
-Samantha Carter-
IC- Pat went on vacation all the time.
ReplyDeleteIC- Pat, loved warm climates, went on vacation all the time.
IC- Abby makes tasty cookies.
IC- Abby, loves baking, makes tasty cookies.
IC- Nicole hated makeup.
IC- Nicole, never wore makeup, hated makeup.
-Samantha Carter-
IC:My binder is blue.
ReplyDeleteIC with RC:My binder that is blue matches my blue jeans.
IC:Dave and busters was the funest party.
IC with RC:Dave and busters, which has tons of games to play is great to have a party at.
IC:Lexi walked to the beach in the rain.
IC with RC:Lexi, who took a walk in the rain got very wet.
IC: The counter is dirty.
ReplyDeleteIC with RC: The counter, that has dirty dishes on it,is dirty.
IC: Math was boring today.
IC with RC: Math, where we did algebra, was boring today.
IC: Snowbording was very fun.
IC with RC: Snowboarding, which we did yesterday,was very fun.
IC: I carried my books to class.
ReplyDeleteIC with RC: I carried my books, which were heavy to class.
IC: I finished my social studies homework.
IC with RC: I finished my, very hard, social studies homework.
IC: My dog ran past the biker.
IC with RC: My dog, which is very energetic, ran past the biker.
-Kim Guthrie
IC: I was sick over the week.
ReplyDeleteIC with RC: I was sick, with a 102 degree temperature, over the week.
IC: I love to surf.
IC with RC: I,over the summer, love to surf.
IC: My legs hurt all of the time.
IC with RC:My legs hurt, after I run, all of the time.
IC: My cousin got her ears pierced.
ReplyDeleteIC with RC: My cousin, who just turned ten, got her ears pierced.
IC: The book I read was really good.
IC with RC: The book, which I just finished, was really good.
IC: Rachel came over today.
IC with RC: Rachel, who is my sister's friend, came over today.
-Kim Guthrie
1. IC: The ice cream is good.
ReplyDeleteIC with RC: The ice cream that I’m eating now is good.
2. IC: Lauren hates snow.
IC with RC: Lauren hates and that’s why she wont go outside.
3. IC: Evan is the best wrestler I know.
IC with RC: Evan, who won sate champs this year is the best wrestler I know.
-Kaitlyn Berry
1. IC: The pen works well.
ReplyDeleteIC with RC: The pen that I'm using works well.
2.IC: This food is good.
IC with RC: This food, which my mom made is good.
3.IC: The cheerleaders are the best.
IC with RC: The cheerleaders, who won 1st place are the best.
-Kaitlyn Berry
IC-Cassidy went to the movies today.
ReplyDeleteIC-RC- Cassidy went to the movies to see a scary movie.
IC- Logan got a cat.
IC-RC- Logan who like cats alot got a new one.
IC- Bill likes to read.
IC-RC- Bill who is reading a long book just finished it.
IC- I love my dog.
ReplyDeleteIC-RC- I love my dog that is a pug.
IC- Abigail loves her cat.
IC-RC- Abigail loves her cat that is fat.
IC- Zoe likes to travel.
IC-RC- Zoe likes to travel all over the world.
IC: Kim walks faster than anyone I have ever seen.
ReplyDeleteIC with RC: Kim, who likes to rush, walks faster than anyone I have ever seen.
IC: Jenny is a lot better at math than me.
IC with RC: Jenny who is a lot better at math than me, is in the tenth grade.
IC: Brad is extremely good at tennis.
IC with RC: Brad, who is a professional tennis player, is extremely good at tennis.
IC: My neighbor has a three-leged cat.
ReplyDeleteIC with RC: My neighbor, who is my sister's best friend, has a three-leged cat.
IC: Stanley is doing his taxes.
IC with RC: Stanly, who has large debts, is doing his taxes.
IC: The house burned down.
IC with RC: The house, that was a historic landmark, burned down.
IC: I brought a puppy.
ReplyDeleteIC with RC:I brought a puppy named crystal at the pet store
Ic: chucky cheese was fun.
Ic with Rc:chucky cheese witch has alot of games is very fun.
IC: Sarha likes makeup.
IC with RC: sarha whos likes makeup brought the makeup at cvs.
IC: My cousin threw up.
ReplyDeleteIC with RC: My cousin, who ate to much threw up.
IC:Sara got wet.
IC with RC:Sara, who walked outside in the rain got wet.
IC: This weeekend I walked my dogs.
IC with RC: This weekend, I walked my dogs because my fence fell down.
Response Two.
IC: On friday my cat died.
IC with RC: On friday, My cat who was very old died.
IC: Yesterday my dog ran away.
IC with RC: Yesterday, My dogs who ran away got in trouble.
IC: Laura fell asleep.
IC with RC: Laura, Who was very tired fell asleep.
IC:Ryan works at dari land.
ReplyDeleteIC with RC:Ryan, who is 15, works at dari land.
IC:My dog likes to run.
IC with RC:My dog, who has short legs, likes to run.
IC:Dave has a jacket thats red.
IC with RC:Dave, whos favorite color is red, has a jacket thats red.
IC:Kelly had a dog.
ReplyDeleteIC with RC:Kelly, had a dog, whos name was spots.
IC:Rob had a car.
IC with RC:Rob, had a car, that was red.
IC:Rebecca doesnt like math class.
IC with RC:Rebecca, who fails most of her tests, hates math class.
IC: The Mets are good at baseball.
ReplyDeleteIC with RC: The Mets are good at baseball because they are professinial.
IC: I have a pool.
IC with RC: I can go swimming because I have a pool.
IC: I live by the sound.
IC with RC: I like to take walks on thye beach because I live by the sound.
IC: The Twilight Saga is very good.
ReplyDeleteIC with RC: The Twilight Saga, which is the series i read last year, was very good.
IC: My guinea pig is very soft.
IC with RC: My guinea pig who i love, is very soft.
IC: My birthday was march third.
IC with RC: My birthday was march third, which means i had a birthday party.
IC: It stopped raining.
ReplyDeleteIC with RC: Even though it stopped raining, the ground is still wet.
IC: I was at a party last night.
IC with RC: Since I was at a prty last night I didn't get home until 2.
IC: I am going to Florida soon.
IC with RC: Because I am going to Florida, I will miss school.
IC: I watched tv all day.
ReplyDeleteIC with RC: It wasn't nice out all day, so i watched tv.
IC: Yesterday, the lights went out.
IC with RC: It was really bad weather out which probably led to someone hitting a poll, made the lights go out.
IC: Nick have a cellphone.
IC with RC: Nick loves to text, who has a cell phone.
IC: My shirt is green.
ReplyDeleteIC with RC: The shirt I have on right now is green.
IC: My dog barks loud.
IC with RC: My dog who is scared of thunder & lightening barked really loud.
IC: My tongue is purple.
Ic with RC: I just had lollipop which turned my tongue purple.
IC- Ally hates reading.
ReplyDeleteIC- Ally, who hates reading, reads anyway.
IC- Chris loves to work.
IC- Chris, who loves to work, got fired.
IC- Mieko loves gymnastics.
IC- Mieko, who loves gymnastics, broke her back from gymnastics.
IC- Julia had two fish.IC- Julia, who had two fish, loved them very much. IC- Joanna loves to cheer.IC- Joanna, who loves to cheer, is very good at it. IC- Maddie loves to dance.IC- Maddie, who loves to dance, is veryy good.
ReplyDeleteIC: I bought a shirt at the store.
ReplyDeleteIC: I bought a shirt at the store, which had flowers on it.
IC: I layed on my bed.
IC: I layed on my bed, while I watched t.v.
IC: I danced around the campfire.
IC: I dancing around the campfire, while my uncle played the gutair.
IC - Jane hates cats.
ReplyDeleteIC with RC - Jane, got scratched by a cat, she hates cats.
IC - Kaycee loves dancing.
IC with RC - Kaycee, takes dancing lessons, she loves dancing.
IC - Ray collects rocks.
IC with RC - Ray, has a rock collection, he collects rocks.
IC: I drank some water.
ReplyDeleteIC: I drank some water, while I was at cheerleading practice.
IC: I did my backhandspring.
IC: I did my backhandspring in the competition routine.
IC: I turned of the light.
IC: I hit the switch which turned of the light.
IC: Billy reads the fastest in the class.
ReplyDeleteIC: Billy, who won the reding contest at the public library last month, reads the fastest in the class.
IC: The game is really fun.
IC: The game that im about to buy is really fun.
IC: Johnny makes the most money in my neihborhood.
IC: Johnny, who started a lawn care service last summer, makes the most money in my neihborhood.
ms. sills I'msorry i accidently forgot to add the with rc to my 2nd IC's I will write them over with rc in it I am very sorry for the inconvienence
ReplyDeleteIC - Barney is a purple dinousaur.
ReplyDeleteIC with RC - Barney, kids love Barney, he's a purple dinousaur.
IC - Calvin plays the drums.
IC with RC - Calvin, got a gig, he plays the drums.
IC - Kara walks dogs.
IC with RC - Kara, takes the dogs to the park, she walks dogs.
IC: Billy reads the fastest in the class.
ReplyDeleteIC with RC: Billy, who won the reading competition at the public library last month, reads the fastest in the class.
IC: The game is really fun.
IC with RC: The game that im about to buy is really fun.
IC: Johnny makes the most money in my neihborhood.
IC with RC: Jhonny, who started a lawn care service last summer makes the most money in my neighborhodd.
IC: Jackie is very smart.
ReplyDeleteIC with RC: Jackie, who got a 98 overall average on her report card, is very smart.
IC: My soccer game is boring.
IC with RC: MY soccer game that I'm playing now is boring.
IC: The book had a good plotline.
IC with RC: The book that I just finished reading had a good plotline.
IC: I love the Summer.
ReplyDeleteIC with RC: We are off from school in the Summer, that is why I love it.
IC: I hate cleaning my room.
IC with RC: I would rather be playing on my computer, which is why I hate cleaning my room.
IC: I like going to Tanger.
IC with RC: Because I like to shop, that is why I like going to Tanger.
IC1:The basketbal game just went off.
ReplyDeleteIC2:I am reading the book Bronx Masquders.
IC3:I am good at Basketball.
IC with RC1:The basketball game went off and Kentucky won75-74.
IC with RC2:I am reading the book Bronx Masquders which teens explain live stories that haven't been revealed to any one yet.
IC with RC3:I am good at Basketball because i make many shots for my team.
ic: Lily is funny.
ReplyDeleteic: Angel is soft.
ic: Rachel is fast.
ic rc: Lily,who is my cousin is funny.
ic rc: Angel,who is my bunny is soft.
ic rc: Rachel,who is my friend is fast.
ic:Christopher is sweet.
ReplyDeleteic:PopPop is very silly.
ic:Buster is mean.
ic rc:Buster which is my dog is mean.
ic rc:PopPop who is my grandpa is very silly.
ic rc:Christopher who is my nephew is sweet.
IC: Johnny is a great drummer.
ReplyDeleteIC with RC: Johnny, who is in a band, is a great drummer.
IC: The cake tasted good.
IC with RC: The cake that I baked tasted good.
IC: Haley bought a hat at the store.
IC with RC: Haley bought a hat, which was purple, at the store.
IC: Aidan came over today.
ReplyDeleteIC with RC: Aidan, who is my cousin, came over today.
IC: Jake is a good actor.
IC with RC: Jake, who was in the play, is a good actor.
IC: Amy went to SCMEA.
IC with RC: Amy, the violinist, went to SCMEA.
IC: I like ham .
ReplyDeleteIC: I like ham , which is an amazing cold cut .
IC: I lost power .
IC: I lost power ,which was really boring .
IC:My dad is tall
IC: My dad ,whose name is Dan, is tall
IC: Bill is talented at baseball.
ReplyDeleteIC with RC: Bill who played baseball all his life, is talented at baseball.
IC: Phil passed his test.
IC with RC: Phil, who is a very smart kid, passed his test.
IC: Carlos did a backflip.
IC with RC: Carlos, who is good at gymnastics,did a backflip.
IC: Reginald tripped down the stairs.
ReplyDeleteIC with RC: Reginald, who is clumsy, tripped down the stairs.
IC: Harry colored in a book.
IC with RC: Harry, who is 5 colored in a book.
IC: Zoey screamed really loud.
IC with RC: Zoey, who is a teenager screamed really loud.
IC:I like to eat cookies
ReplyDeleteICRC:I am fat, because I like cookies
IC:I am very athletic
ICRC: I am in good shape, because I am very athletic.
IC:Shelby is the best sister.
ICRC:Shelby who is my sister, is the best sister.
IC:Sarah loved to write
ReplyDeleteIC:Sarah, loved pens, loved too write
IC:The dog is chasing the cat
IC:The cat that antagonized the dog is now being chased.
IC:I was in a marathon
IC: I like to run, since I like to run, i was in a marathon
IC: The dinner was absolutely delicious.
ReplyDeleteIC with RC: The dinner that I am eating now is absolutely delicious.
IC: The storm is really bad.
IC with RC: The storm that is howling is now really bad.
IC: My grandmother grew up in Croatia.
IC with RC: My grandmother who now lives in America, grew up in Croatia.
Nicholas Mikelinich
IC: My sister is a senior.
ReplyDeleteIC with RC: My sister, who goes to Riverhead High School, is a senior.
IC: My mother is a teaching assitant.
IC with RC: My mother, who works at Phillips Avenue School is a teaching assistant.
IC: My father is a Radio Communications Technician.
IC with RC: My father, who works for Suffolk County Police Department is a Radio Communications Technician.
Nicholas Mikelinich
IC: My sister is coming to visit.
ReplyDeleteIC with RC: My sister, who lives in Nevada, is coming to visit.
IC: My math test was easy.
IC with RC: My math test that I took yesterday was easy.
IC: Sandy had ice cream.
IC with RC: Sandy had ice cream which was vanilla.
IC: Marissa has a computer.
IC with RC: Marissa likes to type so she has a computer.
IC: Tyler likes to listen to music.
IC with RC: Tyler likes to listen to music so he has an iPod.
IC: Kaity loves plays the piano.
IC with RC: Kaity loves plays the piano so she practices every night.
IC: Maggie ran the mile.
ReplyDeleteIC with RC: Maggie, who is a fast runner, ran the mile.
IC: Suzan wants a dog.
IC with RC: Suzan wants a dog that can swim.
IC: James has brown hair.
IC with RC: James, who has brown eyes, has brown hair.
IC:I have a cat
ReplyDeleteIC I have a cat that lives outdoors
IC:I went for a jog
IC When i came back i was all wet from the rain
IC:I bought an animal
IC i Bought and animal that was brown
IC:I like apples
ReplyDeleteIC I like apples that are green
IC:I like the rainbow
IC i like the color purple in the rainbow
IC:I like blankets
IC I like the fuzzy blankets
IC: Ms. Kane is the best teacher.
ReplyDeleteIC with RC: Ms. Kane, who is a lot of fun, is the best teacher.
IC: Rachel has a white bass.
IC with RC: Rachel, that is in orchestra, has a white bass.
IC: I have a pink hat.
IC with RC: I have a pink hat that is badazzeled.
IC: Bob is smelly.
ReplyDeleteIC with rc Bob, who i dont like, is smelly.
ic: Mackenzie loves princesses.
ic with rc Mackenzie, who thinks she is a princess, loves princesses
ic: The duck wants to fly
ic with rc the duck,that usually swims, wants to fly
ic: Joe jumped off of his roof.
ReplyDeleteic with rc Joe, who is not very smart, jumped off of his roof.
ic: the computer broke.
ic with rc the computer, that is old, broke.
ic: this sentence doesnt look right
ic with rc this sentence, which has no punctuation, doesnt look right
IC: James is fast
ReplyDeleteIC with RC: James who is a fast runner won the race
IC: There are two tv's on
IC with RC: Who cut the tv's on
IC: The camera brok
IC with RC: Who broke the camera
IC: The chearleader sprained her ancle
ReplyDeleteIC with RC: The chearleader who sprained her ancle was captain
IC: The cat ran away
IC with RC: The cat that ran away was black
IC: The kid danced
IC with RC: The kid that danced won an award
IC:Bob jumped off of his car.
ReplyDeleteIC with RC Bob,who was not that smart, jumped off the car.
IC:the dirt bike won't start.
IC with RC dirt bike, is old,broke.
IC:sally is old.
IC with RC sally,who I don't like,is old.