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Carl Sagan: 1934—1997
Carl Sagan, was a distinguished scientist, author, and educator who was trained in both astronomy and biology. He served as a leading adviser to the National Aeronautics and Space Administration (nasa) from the time American space exploration began, and he receives many awards for his contributions to planetary science and environmental preservation. Sagan also captured the imaginations of millions of people with an interested book called Life in the Universe and Other Essays. His gift for explaining difficult scientific concepts in ways that people could easier understand helped make him one of the finest science educators in the world. Carl sagan will always be remembered as a brightly and gifted scientist.
Carl Sagan was a distinguished scientist, author, and educator who was trained in both astronomy and biology. He served as a leading adviser to the National Aeronautics and Space Administration (NASA) from the time American space exploration began.He receives many awards for his contributions to planetary science and environmental preservation. Sagan also captured the imaginations of millions of people with an interested book called Life in the Universe and Other Essays. His gift for explaining difficult scientific concepts in ways that people could easier understand helped make him one of the finest science educators in the world. Carl sagan will always be remembered as a brightly and gifted scientist.
ReplyDeleteCarl Sagan, was a distinguished scientist, author, and educator who was trained in both astronomy and biology. He served as a leading adviser to the National Aeronautics and Space Administration (nasa) from the time American space exploration began, and he receives many awards for his contributions to planetary science and environmental preservation. Sagan also captured the imaginations of millions of people with an interested book called Life in the Universe and Other Essays. His gift for explaining difficult scientific concepts in ways that people could easier understand helped make him one of the finest science educators in the world. Carl sagan will always be remembered as a brightly and gifted scientist.
Carl Sagan was a distinguished scientist, author, and educator who were trained in both astronomy and biology. He served as a leading adviser to the National Aeronautics and Space Administration (NASA) from the time American space exploration began, and he receives many awards for his contributions to planetary science, and environmental preservation. Sagan also captured the imaginations of millions of people with an interested book called “Life in the Universe and Other Essays”. His gift for explaining difficult scientific concepts in ways that people could easier understand helped make him one of the finest science educators in the world. Carl Sagan will always be remembered as a brightly and gifted scientist.
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Carl Sagan: 1934—1997
ReplyDeleteCarl Sagan was a distinguished scientist, author, and educator who was trained in both astronomy and biology. He served as a leading advisor to the National Aeronautics and Space Administration (nasa) from the time American space exploration began. He received many awards for his contributions to planetary science and environmental preservation. Sagan also captured the imaginations of millions of people with an interested book called "Life in the Universe and Other Essays". His gift for explaining difficult scientific concepts in ways that people could easily understand, helped make him one of the finest science educators in the world. Carl Sagan will always be remembered as a bright and gifted scientist.
Carl Sagan: 1934—1997
ReplyDeleteCarl Sagan was a distinguished scientist, author, and educator who was trained in both astronomy and biology. He served as a leading adviser to the National Aeronautics and Space Administration (NASA) from the time American space exploration began. He received many awards for his contributions to planetary science and environmental preservation. Sagan also captured the imaginations of millions of people with an interested book called "Life in the Universe and Other Essays". His gift for explaining difficult scientific concepts in ways that people could easily understand. They helped make him one of the finest science educators in the world. Carl Sagan will always be remembered as a brightly and gifted scientist.
Carl Sagan: 1934—1997
ReplyDeleteCarl Sagan was a distinguished scientist, author, and educator who was trained in both astronomy and biology. He served as a leading adviser to the National Aeronautics and Space Administration (NASA) from the time American space exploration began, and he received many awards for his contributions to planetary science and environmental preservation. Sagan also captured the imaginations of millions of people with an interesting book called Life in the Universe and Other Essays. His gift for explaining difficult scientific concepts in ways that people could more easily understand helped make him one of the finest science educators in the world. Carl Sagan will always be remembered as a bright and gifted scientist.
Carl Sagan: 1934—1997
ReplyDeleteCarl Sagan, was a distinguished scientist, author, and educator who was trained in both astronomy and biology. He served as a leading adviser to the National Aeronautics and Space Administration (nasa) from the time American space exploration began, and he receives many awards for his contributions to planetary science and environmental preservation. Sagan also captured the imaginations of millions of people with an interested book called Life in the Universe and Other Essays. His gift for explaining difficult scientific concepts in ways that people could easier understand helped make him one of the finest science educators in the world. Carl sagan will always be remembered as a brightly and gifted scientist.
Carl Sagan: 1934—1997
Carl Sagan, was a distinguished scientist, author, and educator who was trained in both astronomy and biology. He served as a leading adviser to the National Aeronautics and Space Administration (NASA) from the time American space exploration began; he received many awards for his contributions to Planetary Science and Environmental Preservation. Sagan also captured the imaginations of millions of people with an interesting book called Life in the Universe and Other Essays. His gift for explaining difficult scientific concepts in ways that people could easily understand helped make him one of the finest science educators in the world. Carl Sagan will always be remembered as a brightly and gifted scientist.
Carl Sagan: 1934—1997
ReplyDeleteCarl Sagan was a distinguished scientist, author, and educator who was trained in both astronomy and biology. He served as a leading adviser to the National Aeronautics and Space Administration (NASA) from the time American space exploration began, and he received many awards for his contributions to planetary science and environmental preservation. Sagan also captured the imaginations of millions of people with an interesting book called, Life in the Universe and Other Essays. His gift for explaining difficult scientific concepts in ways that people could easily understand helped make him one of the finest science educators in the world. Carl Sagan will always be remembered as a bright and gifted scientist.
Carl Sagan: 1934-1997
ReplyDeleteCarl Sagan was a distinguished scientist, author, and educator who was trained in both astronomy and biology. He served as a leading adviser to the National Aeronautics and Space Administration (NASA) from the time American space exploration began, and he received many awards for his contributions to planetary science and environmental preservation. Sagan also captured the imaginations of millions of people with an interested book called Life in the Universe and Other Essays. His gift for explaining difficult scientific concepts in ways that people could easily understand helped make him one of the finest science educators in the world. Carl Sagan will always be remembered as a bright and gifted scientist.
Carl Sagan: 1934—1997
ReplyDeleteCarl Sagan was a distinguished scientist, author, and educator who was trained in both astronomy and biology. He served as a leading adviser to the National Aeronautics and Space Administration (NASA) from the time American space exploration began. He received many awards for his contributions to planetary science and environmental preservation. Sagan also captured the imaginations of millions of people with an interesting book called Life in the Universe and Other Essays. His gift for explaining difficult scientific concepts in ways that people could easily understand, helped make him one of the finest science educators in the world. Carl Sagan will always be remembered as a bright and gifted scientist.
Carl Sagan: 1934—1997
ReplyDeleteCarl Sagan was a distinguished scientist, author, and educator who was trained in both astronomy and biology. He served as a leading advisor to the National Aeronautics and Space Administration (NASA) from the time American space exploration began, and he received many awards for his contributions to planetary science and environmental preservation. Sagan also captured the imaginations of millions of people with an interesting book called Life in the Universe and Other Essays. His gift for explaining difficult scientific concepts in ways that people could more easily understand helped make him one of the finest science educators in the world. Carl Sagan will always be remembered as a bright and gifted scientist.
Carl Sagan: 1934—1997
ReplyDeleteCarl Sagan, was a distinguished scientist, author, and educator who was trained in both astronomy and biology. He served as a leading adviser to the National Aeronautics and Space Administration (N.A.S.A.) from the time American space exploration began .And he received many awards for his contributions to planetary science and environmental preservation. Carl Sagan also captured the imaginations of millions of people with an interesting book called Life in the Universe and Other Essays. His gift for explaining difficult scientific concepts, in ways that people could easier understand, helped make him one of the finest science educators in the world. Carl Sagan will always be remembered as a bright and gifted scientist.
Carl Sagan: 1934—1997
ReplyDeleteCarl Sagan was a distinguished scientist, author and educator who was trained in both astronomy and biology. He served as a leading adviser to the National Aeronautics and Space Administration (NASA) from the time American space exploration began, and he received many awards for his contributions to planetary science and environmental preservation. Sagan also captured the imaginations of millions of people with an interesting book called "Life in the Universe and Other Essays." His gift for explaining difficult scientific concepts in ways that people could easier understand helped make him one of the finest science educators in the world. Carl Sagan will always be remembered as a bright and gifted scientist.
Carl Sagan was a distinguished scientist, author, and educator who was trained in both astronomy and biology. He served as a leading adviser to the National Aeronautics and Space Administration(NASA)from the time American space exploration began, and he received many awards for his contributions to planetary science and environmental preservation. Sagan also captured the imaginations of millions of people with an interesting book called Life in the Universe and Other Essays. His gift for explaining difficult scientific concepts in ways that people could easier understand helped make him one of the finest science educators in the world. Carl Sagan will always be remembered as a bright and gifted scientist.
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Carl Sagan: 1934—1997
ReplyDeleteCarl Sagan was a distinguished scientist, author, educator, biology and also who was trained in astronomy. He served as a leading adviser to the National Aeronautics and Space Administration NASA from the time American space exploration began, and he receives many awards for his contributions to planetary science and environmental preservation. Sagan also captured the imaginations of millions of people with an interested book called Life in the Universe and Other Essays. His gift for explaining difficult scientific concepts in ways that people could easier understand helped make him one of the finest science educators in the world. Carl Sagan will always be remembered as a brightly and gifted scientist.
Hi Ms.Sills this is a redo.
ReplyDeleteCarl Sagan: 1934—1997
Carl Sagan was a distinguished scientist, author, educator, biology and also who was trained in astronomy. He served as a leading adviser to the National Aeronautics and Space Administration NASA from the time American space exploration began. He receives many awards for his contributions to planetary science and environmental preservation. Sagan also captured the imaginations of millions of people with an interested book called Life in the Universe and Other Essays. His gift for explaining difficult scientific concepts in ways that people could easier understand helped make him one of the finest science educators in the world. Carl Sagan will always be remembered as a brightly and gifted scientist.
Here is the paragraph corrected.
ReplyDeleteCarl Sagan: 1934—1997
Carl Sagan was a distinguished scientist, author, and educator who was trained in both astronomy and biology. He served as a leading adviser to the National Aeronautics and Space Administration (NASA) from the time American space exploration began, and he received many awards for his contributions to planetary science and environmental preservation. Sagan also captured the imaginations of millions of people with an interesting book called Life in the Universe and Other Essays. His gift for explaining difficult scientific concepts in ways that people could more easily understand helped make him one of the finest science educators in the world. Carl Sagan will always be remembered as a bright and gifted scientist.
As a note, the comment box doesn't show italics or bold or underlining, but if you look in the original paragraph, the book title is italicized. The proper treatment of a book title is either italicized or underlined, so this needed no editing. I didn't take off points for those of you who added quotation marks, even though it is technically wrong to put quotation marks around a book title, because of the formatting limitations of the comment box.