Following is a paragraph with approximately 5-7 errors. Please copy and paste the paragraph into the comment box and make all necessary corrections. By the time you post your response, all corrections should have been made.
Please note: this assignment will change daily. You must complete the editing process for two of the assignments this week. That means that you must do the homework on two separate days. There will be no comment back to another student this week, just the two responses. If you complete more than 2 responses, your top two scores will count.
Here is the excerpt (From Cloning and Genetic Engineering by Holly Cefrey):
All living things are made of cells. The cell is a living watery unit. Its the basic building block of all life. Certain organisms need only won block. Some bacteria and germs are made of only one cell. On the other hand the complex human body is made of trillions of cells.
Cells perform many important jobs. They take in food, and get rid of waste products. During the time they are alive, cells also reproduce, or make more cells. Though cells come in different sizes, all is extremely small. Hundreds of average-sized cells would fit inside the period at the end of this sentence.
All living things are made up of cells. A cell is a living watery unit; it’s the basic building block of all life. Certain organisms need only one block. Some bacteria and germs are made of only one cell. On the other hand the complex human body is made of trillions of cells.
ReplyDeleteCells perform many important jobs. They take in food, and get rid of waste products. During the time they are alive; cells also reproduce, or make more cells. Though cells come in different sizes, all are extremely small. Hundreds of average-sized cells would fit inside the period at the end of this sentence.
All living things are made of cells. The cell is a living watery unit. It's the basic building block of all life. Certain organisms need only one block. Some bacteria and germs are made of only one cell. On the other hand the complex human body is made of trillions of cells.
ReplyDeleteCells perform many important jobs. They take in food and get rid of waste products. During the time they are alive cells also reproduce, or make more cells. Though cells come in different sizes, all are extremely small. Hundreds of average-sized cells would fit inside the period at the end of this sentence.
BEFORE:All living things are made of cells. The cell is a living watery unit. Its the basic building block of all life. Certain organisms need only won block. Some bacteria and germs are made of only one cell. On the other hand the complex human body is made of trillions of cells.
ReplyDeleteCells perform many important jobs. They take in food, and get rid of waste products. During the time they are alive, cells also reproduce, or make more cells. Though cells come in different sizes, all is extremely small. Hundreds of average-sized cells would fit inside the period at the end of this sentence.
AFTER:All living things are made of cells. The cell is a living watery unit. It's(1) the basic building block of all life.(2). Some bacteria and germs are made of only one(3) cell. On the other hand the complex human body is made of trillions of cells.
Cells perform many important jobs. They take in food, and get rid of waste products. During the time they are alive (4)cells also reproduce, or make more cells. Though cells come in different sizes, all are(5) extremely small. Hundreds of average-sized cells could(6) fit inside the period at the end of this sentence.
All living tings are made of cells. A cell is a living,water unit. It is the building block of all life. Certain organisms need only one block,and some bacteria and germs are made of only one cell. On the other hand,the complex human body is made up of trillions of cells.
ReplyDeleteCells perform many important jobs. Cells take in food,and get rid of waste products. During their life cells reproduce or make more cells. Although cells come in different sizes they all are extremely small. Hundreds of average size cells could fit inside the period at the end of this sentence.
All living things are made of cells. The cell is a living watery unit. It's the basic building block of all life. Certain organisms need only one block. Some bacteria and germs are made of only one cell. On the other hand, the complex human body is made of trillions of cells.
ReplyDeleteCells perform many important jobs. They take in food and get rid of waste products. During the time they are alive, cells also reproduce or make more cells. Though cells come in different sizes, all is extremely small. Hundreds of average sized cells would fit inside the period at the end of this sentence.
All living things are made of cells. The cell is a living watery unit. It’s the basic building block of all life. Certain organisms need only one block. Some bacteria and germs are made of only one cell. On the other hand the complex human body is made of trillions of cells.
ReplyDeleteCells perform many important jobs. They take in food, and get rid of wasted products. During the time they are alive; cells also reproduce, or make more cells. Though cells come in different sizes, all are extremely small. Hundreds of average-sized cells would fit inside the periods at the end of these sentences.
-SAMANTHA CARTER-
All living things are made of cells. The cell is a living watery unit. Its the basic building block of all life. Certain organisms need only won block. Some bacteria and germs are made of only one cell. On the other hand the complex human body is made of trillions of cells.
ReplyDeleteKayla Ormandy
Cells perform many important jobs. They take in food, and get rid of waste products. During the time they are alive, cells also reproduce, or make more cells. Though cells come in different sizes, all is extremely small. Hundreds of average-sized cells would fit inside the period at the end of this sentence.
All living things are made of cells. The cell is a living watery unit. It's the basic building block of all life. Certain organisms need only one block. Some bacteria and germs are made of only one cell, on the other hand the complex human body is made of trillions of cells.
Cells perform many important jobs. They take in food and get rid of waste products. During the time they are alive cells also reproduce, or make more cells. Though cells come in different sizes all are extremely small. Hundreds of average sized cells would fit inside the period at the end of this sentence.
All living things are made of cells. The cell is a living watery unit, Its the basic building block of all life. Certain organisms need only one block. Some bacteria and germs are made of only one cell. On the other hand the complex human body is made up of trillions of cells.
ReplyDeleteCells perform many important jobs. They take in food, and get rid of waste products. During the time they are alive, cells also reproduce, or make more cells. Though cells come in different sizes, all is extremely small. Hundreds of average-sized cells would fit inside the period at the end of this sentence.
All living things are made of cells. The cell is a living water unit. It's the basic building block of our life. Certain organisms need only one block. Some bacteria and germs are made of only one cell, on the other hand the complex human body is made of trillions of cells.
ReplyDeleteCells perform many important jobs. They take in food, and also get rid of waste products. During the time they are alive, cells also reproduce, or make more cells. Though cells come in different sizes. They are all extremely small. Hundreds of average sized cells would fit inside the period at the end of this sentence.
All living things are made of cells, the cell is a living watery unit. It’s the basic building block of all life. Certain organisms need only one block. Some bacteria and germs are made of only one cell. On the other hand, the complex human body is made of trillions of cells.
ReplyDeleteCells perform many important jobs they take in food, and get rid of waste products. During the time they are alive cells also reproduce, or make more cells. Though cells come in different sizes, all are extremely small. Hundreds of average-sized cells would fit inside the period at the end of this sentence.
All living things are made of cells. The cell is a living watery unit, it's the basic building block of all life. Certain organisms need only won block. Some bacteria and germs are made of only one cell. On the other hand the complex human body is made of trillions of cells.
ReplyDeleteCells perform many important jobs. They take in food and get rid of waste products. During the time they are alive; cells also reproduce, or make more cells. Though cells come in different sizes, all are extremely small. Hundreds of average-sized cells would fit inside the period at the end of this sentence.
All living things are made of cells. The cell is a living watery unit. Its the basic building block of all life. Certain organisms need only won block. Some bacteria and germs are made of only one cell. On the other hand the complex human body is made of trillions of cells.
ReplyDeleteCells perform many important jobs. They take in food, and get rid of waste products. During the time they are alive, cells also reproduce, or make more cells. Though cells come in different sizes, all is extremely small. Hundreds of average-sized cells would fit inside the period at the end of this sentence.
All living things are made of cells. The cell is is like living in a watery unit. It is the basic building block of all life. Certain organisms need only one block. Some bacterica and germs are made of only one cell. On the other hand, the complex human body is made of trillions of cells.
Cells perform mant important jobs. They take food in and get rid of waste products. During the time they are alive, cells also reproduce or make more cells. Though cells come in different sizes, all is extemely small. Hundrdds of average sized cells would fit inside the period at the end of this sentence.
All living things are made of cells. The cell is a living, watery unit. It’s the basic building block of all life. Certain organisms need only one block. Some bacteria and germs are made of only one cell. On the other hand, the complex human body is made of trillions of cells.
ReplyDeleteCells perform many important jobs. They take in food, and get rid of waste products. During the time they are alive, cells also reproduce, or make more cells. Though cells come in different sizes, all are extremely small. Hundreds of average-sized cells would fit inside the period at the end of this sentence.
-Kaitlyn Berry
All living things are made of cells. The cell is a living, watery unit. It’s the basic building block of all life. Certain organisms need only one block. Some bacteria and germs are made of only one cell. On the other hand, the complex human body is made of trillions of cells.
ReplyDeleteCells perform many important jobs. They take in food, and get rid of waste products. During the time they are alive, cells also reproduce, or make more cells. Though cells come in different sizes, all are extremely small. Hundreds of average-sized cells would fit inside the period at the end of this sentence.
-Kaitlyn Berry
All living things are made of cells. The cell is a living watery unit. It's the basic building block of all life. Certain organisms need only one block. Some bacteria and germs are made of only one cell. On the other hand, the complex human body is made of trillions of cells.
ReplyDeleteCells perform many important jobs. They take in food, and get rid of waste products. During the time they are alive, cells reproduce, or make more cells. Though cells come in different sizes, all are extremely small. Hundreds of average-sized cells would fit inside the period at the end of this sentence.
All living things are made of cells. The cell is a living, watery unit. It's the basic building block of all life. Certain organisms need only one block. Some bacteria and germs are made of only one cell. On the other hand, the complex human body is made of trillions of cells.
ReplyDeleteCells perform many important jobs. They take in food, and get rid of waste products. During the time they are alive, cells also reproduce, or make more cells. Though cells come in different sizes. All is extremely small. Hundreds of average-sized cells would fit inside the period at the end of this sentence.
Anthony Smith
ReplyDeleteAll living things are made up of cells. A cell is a living water unit. It is the basic building block of life.Certain organism need only one block. Some bacteria and germs are made of oonly on e cell. On the other hand the complete human body is made up of trillions of cells. Cells preform many important jobs. They take in food, And get rid of waste products.Though cells come in different sizes, all is extremely small. Hundreds of average- sized cells fit inside the period at the end of this sentance.
ReplyDeleteAll living things are made of cells. The cell is a living watery unit. It’s the basic building block of all life, certain organisms need only one block. Some bacteria and germs are made of only one cell. On the other hand the complex human body is made of trillions of cells.
ReplyDeleteCells perform many important jobs. They take in food, and get rid of waste products. During the time they are alive, cells also reproduce, or make more cells. Though cells come in different sizes, all are extremely small. Hundreds of average-sized cells would fit inside the period at the end of this sentence.
All living things are made of cells. The cell is a living watery unit. Its the basic building block of all life. Certain organism's need only one block. Some bacteria and germs are made of only one cell. On the other hand the complex human body is made of trullions of cell's.
ReplyDeleteCells perform many important jobs. They take in food and get rid of waste products. During the time they are alive, cells allso reprooduce or make more cells. Though cells come in different sizes, all are extremely small. hundreds of average sized cells would fit inside the period at the end of this sentence.
All living things are made of cells. The cell is a living watery unit. It's the basic building block of all life.Some bacteria and germs are made of only one cell. On the other hand the complex human body is made of trillions of cells.
ReplyDeleteCells perform many important jobs. They take in food and get rid of waste products. During the time they are alive, cells also reproduce, or make more cells. Though cells come in different sizes, all cells are extremely small. Hundreds of average-sized cells would fit inside the period at the end of this sentence.
All living things are made of cells. A cell is a living watery unit. It's one of the basic building blocks of all life. Certain organisms need only one block. Some bacteria and germs are made of only one cell. On the other hand, the complex human body is made of trillions of cells.
ReplyDeleteCells perform many important jobs. They take in food and get rid of waste products. During the time they are alive, cells also reproduce, or make more cells. Though cells come in different sizes, they are all extremely small. Hundreds of average-sized cells would fit inside the period at the end of this sentence.
All living things are made out of cells. The cell is a living watery unit. It's the basic building block of all life. Certain organisms need only one block. Some bacteria and germs are made out of only one cell. On the other hand the complete human body is made of trillions' of cells.
ReplyDeleteCells perform many important jobs. They take in food, and get rid of waste products. During the time they are alive, cells also reproduce, or make more cells. Though cells come in different sizes, all is extremely small. Hundreds of average-sized cells would fit inside the period at the end of this sentence.
Here is the corrected version:
ReplyDeleteAll living things are made of cells. The cell is a living, watery unit. It's the basic building block of all life. Certain organisms need only one block. Some bacteria and germs are made of only one cell. On the other hand, the complex human body is made of trillions of cells.
Cells perform many important jobs. They take in food and get rid of waste products. During the time they are alive, cells also reproduce, or make more cells. Though cells come in different sizes, all are extremely small. Hundreds of average-sized cells would fit inside the period at the end of this sentence.
All living things are made of cells. The cell is a living, watery unit. It's the basic building block of all life. Certain organisms need only one block. Some bacteria and germs are made of only one cell. On the other hand, the complex human body is made of trillions of cells.
ReplyDeleteCells perform many important jobs. They take in food and get rid of waste products. During the time they are alive, cells also reproduce, or make more cells. Though cells come in different sizes, all are extremely small. Hundreds of average-sized cells would fit inside the period at the end of this sentence.
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